I actually disagree with the statement that the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns because of two main reasons.

The First is that money could be a good starter for searching for a job. It’s definitely a vital a vital option or vatal.->vital은 형용사이므로 But that’s not the only important aspect. I think more and more people today kind of hope for work-life balance.

The company that provides that balance is better option for those people other than money.

Like for example, Like My father, when he searching for a new job, he focused more on how the company provides healthcare, how that company gives free time for them employees. breaks and stuff… Finally, he went to a the company that gives less money, but also provides more and more healthcare benefits.

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