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Hello Eva, let me introduce myself to you. This is Taesoo, Kim and I’m in my early 30s. And, I live in an apartment in Jinju. Also, when I have free time, I usually watch some movies and listen to music on Youtube channel. Actually I’m a job seeker. So, these days I’m looking for a job as a vaccine production manager. I’d like to work in this field because I was majored in microbiology in Pusan National University and I’m also interested in vaccine production due to the COVID-19 pandemic. Therefore, I hope I really want to work for a global pharmaceutical company such as(like) Astrazeneca, Pfizer, Novavax… things like that. That’s it(That’s everything about me).